Changes to film treatment

We tested out the idea of writing in a journal as a way to convey thoughts rather than having a voice over and we do feel that this idea looks quite amateurish and we are looking into other ways as to how we can convey thoughts.


We decided that we would also change the theme to bullying instead of self-harming as it could be very effective without looking un-realistic.
We also changed the idea of the thoughts coming to life as we didn't think it was within our ability to do this with the equipment we have at hand.